By Biologist28
10/23/2009 - 04:22:59
Type: Captain
Rating: -1 (Not rated)
Description
Zack looked to the ceiling of the old farmhouse, his leg still in writhing pain. As he lay on the tattered sofa, his glare only increased. "Stupid Sarah!" He said venemously, "She gets to go to the movies and I HAVE to stay here?" He grabbed a piece of protruding stuffing and threw it as best he could. "Just wait, Sarah... I'll get you good--"A loud knock suddenly pentrated Zack's thoughts of revenge. For just a moment, he stopped his poisonous scowl and raised his red brow. Quickly he looked at the clock--ten p.m.? Zack slowly pushed himself off the couch. "Who on earth would be out here at this time? Uncle Zeb and Aunt Molly just left with Sarah..." He cautiously moved toward the screen door. Had they forgotten something? Zack shook his head as he made his way toward the porch light switch. If it was them, then they would have simply come in... As the rusted switch fell, the outside remained in blanketed shadow. "Wonderful," he spat.Zack put his eyes to the screen, but could only make out a blurred shape amidst the darkness. "Hello?"The figure didn't speak, but shifted on the rickety floor boards. Zack hitched the lock. "Freak."He turned his back and headed toward the living room.The person knocked on the door again, just as deliberately as before. Zack stopped dead in his tracks, the realization coming to him. "Sarah--" he hissed, "You're out there trying to scare me aren't you?" His eyes curved into a mask of livid cruelty."Nice try, kid, but I'm SO much better at this than you.""Sticks and stones...."Zack stopped. That voice--it wasn't Sarah's. Eyes still on the door, he searched the kitchen (as it was right by the door) for a suitable light. Zack's hands were shaking slightly, but he managed to find an old flashlight coated with a thin layer of grime. "Sticks and stones, will break your bones...." The voice came again, raspy and withered. Half regretting how close he was, Zack raised the light and flipped the switch...lRefined Version coming soon! Maybe.... ;)>
DNA points
40 Bones | 2 Feet | 2 Hands |
Health: +2
5 %
Sociability 8 / 20 | Aggressiveness 4 / 20 | Abilities 0 / 15 |
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By 11codeX11
The description is great! Freaked me out! Sticks and stones will break your bones!
By MeteorFlash45
You should make the stroy an adventure!
By ogichi_seo
ok i was gettign a little creeped out and then it ends marvelous! i wanna hear the end if u don't mind. u is great story teller
By Icarax
Please try out my latest adventure featuring my infamous Vuliussus, Invasion and Infestation. I made sure not to have any references to religion (I think). ;)
By Icarax
Xsinac is only a small part in my writing. Check out my Eternity War chapters for the full awesome experience!
By Icarax
Wow, you could be a horror author or movie maker. Is this another Wendigo thing or something completely different?
By BioCreator616
beast story i love it it is actually really scary which proves you are deffinitly gonna get a job as a scary book author
By Shadowklaw
how should I put this..... AWESOME STORY!!!! check out my latest stuff!
By Biologist28
I'll try to upload the whole thing--let's see...
By Fatalyze
awesome story ^_^ GIMME MOAR!
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