By Bertolli
 

By the way, thanks for the comment after the the constructive critizim one that meant a real lot to me.

By Bertolli
 

Frenzy may i ask for DREADZONE where were some of the places i need improvement on??? I want to improve my next adventure. But thanks for the critizm though i promise to improve my next adventure and to not fail epically!!

By Bertolli
 

Frenzy this was alot of fun but i need help. Can you try out an adventure called DREADZONE Episode one. Please tell me what you think and if anything needs fixing. By the way great adventure!!!!!