Sporistics
Comm-Terminal
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Por wiljo
09/02/2013 - 21:03:54

Tipo: Edificio de ayuntamiento
Puntuación: 0 (No puntuado)
Tags: dying wish, message, ravaal, recording, wiljo

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(Why a communication terminal? Because I am horrible at making them, that's why xD)Infront of the stasis pod Ravaal lies dead, bleeding from the mouth. He had been sick for a long time with a disease that had developed so far that it could no longer be cured, still he did not let it slow him down. After he lost his wife to a heart disease, he found it ironic to go down in the same manner.Soon after he had administered his daughter heavy duty amnesiacs he made three recordings, one that would threaten lives of innocents in a nearby market district and one that held his true message. The third one was to be delivered to the Hierarch.---------------"Is it on?""Y-yes sir...""Greetings members of the law enforcement, or whoever happens to find this terminal. Before you jump to any conclusions... No lives were truly threatened. It was all a ruse to get you in here and listen to my mess-ngh..."Sir!?""I am fine...""You are drooling blood! Maybe we should get to the nearest hospital and see what they could do.""It's no use, I am already dead anyway. Now keep on recording.""As you wish sir...""Where was I?... Oh yes. You are here to listen to my message... and of course if you are listening to this, then I am already dead, most likely on the floor in this room. The pod in front of you contains something very dear to me. The young woman inside is my daughter, though if you would ask her if she recognized my picture or my voice, she would ask you "who is that?". I... I gave her amnesiacs so she could forget everything about her past of hiding and living in fear. Do not arrest her, she was never with me on raids or other forms of attacks. I did not allow it. Even her mother was against the idea. I would be glad if you made her study politics and try to disallow her any contact with the military or anything too closely related to that.""Sir. I wish you could leave this be and give a chance for the hospital.""No... We record this message and that's it.""Alright sir...""The mask she wears should never be removed. No, it is not a traditional cover. It was a necessity to keep her from killing us. One of our more successful raids caused a bit of... problems. When we got home and checked what we had taken from the industrial site we hit, my daughter accidentally opened a canister filled with this gaseous substance. Sadly we noticed it's effects extremely soon, it heightened the amount of adrenaline created within the subjects body, also making them extremely aggressive. My daughter killed two of my men fifteen seconds after she inhaled the gas, the worst part is that the gas was mostly a cloud of symbiotic bacteria that became a part of her bloodstream. I took some neural dampeners and attached them to a custom built mask."(After his words Ravaal takes a deep breath and begins to cry)"I already sent him away... *cough* And before I draw my last breath I have to say some more words... I beg of you... Do not deem her guilty of my crimes, she is... the only good thing I ever had created in this universe, how I wish that I could have spent more time with her... Oh well, the universe has a cruel sense of humor."(The pale Kamorran smiles at the camera)"It was an honor to serve you all while it lasted. May the empire never fall..."Soon after his words Ravaal falls on the floor and gasps for breath one last time. Keeping his sad yet happy expression.---------------

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Por Kaleon
 

I see, nice find.

Por Kaleon
 

Even if she was naked she is covered in fur and there is nothing to see. That's the nice thing about fur, it makes situations where clothing would be harder to explain than a lack thereof less awkward. Fortunately this is not one of those situations.

Por Kaleon
 

That is actually very good. The dialogue subtly defines the characters very well. I enjoyed reading it.

Por Kaleon
 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uGfNmyVhpiFPK5oKfVwNGfo3KVETsS7kKg6JQH5UsVM/edit?usp=sharing

Por Kaleon
 

On that note I too have been slowly working on my own document. It has changed a bit since you last saw it though it is not finished. Go ahead and give it a read.

Por Kaleon
 

You will need to give me access to see the document. I have sent a request.

Por Kaleon
 

A certain what?

Por Neepogroz
 

How do you get to type so much??

Por Kaleon
 

If it's alright with you I would like to include a link to the story when I share Essa herself on the website. She is now officially complete.

Por Kaleon
 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uGfNmyVhpiFPK5oKfVwNGfo3KVETsS7kKg6JQH5UsVM/edit

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