By amarae1369
 

mik moore (make more)

By BENJIBENJI
 

I just played your adventure and I find it really cool ! If you still plan to continue this story, I'll be pleased to play it ! And don't worry if there are some mistakes in spelling, I think that you're good at writing !

By Paxnfacto
 

you are doing good at both writing and adventure layout -some typos in the text - but I look forward to the next chapter

By Paxnfacto
 

This actually is a very charming and fun story so far. and deep! how old are you? I am impressed by your story telling skills and scene layout. I don't have Creepy and cute so I can't rate it but a thumbs up from me!