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By Galactaea
 

The epilogue for hopeless could be 10 years in the future

By Galactaea
 

Ack the computer sent my comment early

By Galactaea
 

The hopeless finale cpuld

By Galactaea
 

True. Of course my idea was referring to later,perhaps much later. Yeah, no, not one of those cartoon "so they just met and yeah they love eachother now" things XD

By Galactaea
 

Perhaps have Qebiak tell Gallien to get stuff for her, etc. Gallien would go along with it. Geez, eh? This guy needs to grow a backbone.

By Galactaea
 

Also, maybe have Qebiak push Gallien around a bit, being an overall asshole, because she thinks it's funny

By Galactaea
 

Include Sek's forced self-optimism in the next part. Also, as the survivors learn more of Sek's story overtime, they may wonder: Why's he so determined to survive, if he's lost literally everything? What's he got to live for (it's a mystery)

By Galactaea
 

Include Sek's forced self-optimism in the next part. Also, as the survivors learn more of Sek's story overtime, they may wonder: Why's he so determined to survive, if he's lost literally everything? What's he got to live for (it's a mystery)

By Galactaea
 

Gallien also says "sorry" way too much for stupid things.

By Galactaea
 

He isn't the type to kill people, and was forced to. He'd probably never do it again, though, since it scarred him. He's a major pushover, and won't stand up for himself.

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