By someguy38
 

btw, you should have more screens.

By someguy38
 

oh, you should explain more about the story behind this adventure. Very nice adventure!

By someguy38
 

And you should use invisable walls (Blue Gates set to invisable in the behavier menu) to keep the player from leaving areas on the planet.

By someguy38
 

scratch that, this one is about tips to make it better. you need to lower the ramp on that platform in the ocean by moving it while holding Ctrl, this will lower it so you can get onto it wile in the water. you should mark where the teleporters go.

By someguy38
 

You need to add a begining/end/lose text. You need to also make the adventure more direct, I had to travel all the way around the planet several times to get to the places I needed to. My next comment will countinue my rants.