By exxon
 

Amazing! Fantastic design! Great story!

By Kai-Uwe79
 

IMPORTANT: this version is buggy. i fixed it. please tryout the patched version

By Kai-Uwe79
 

hm. looks like the energycore makes some problems.... the chapter changes during i was in talk-mode -,- ... i talked to this shitty thing thousend times before and that doesnt happen. ok...bugfix nr.1 :-/

By Kai-Uwe79
 

thx. i will let you know it. but let me tryout the first episodes (this one really could get a bigger storry, but first i`ll learn to go :)

By Salabasama
 

(But, by offering to help, I am not saying that yours is not understandable. All that you said was understandable, but if you would like I could make it sound more natural)

By Salabasama
 

Hey, awesome adventure so far. I await part 2. Also, if you want, I could help with the English.

By Kai-Uwe79
 

locked character btw. its better for the atmosphere if the hero is not to good equiped. especially if the atmosphere should be a bit creepy

By Kai-Uwe79
 

It took a while with the text. Long time gone since i used so much english ^^ ... and with some grammer i could need help from time to time :x but i hope its good enough to understand :)