Por Beastmaster7700
 

Don't be, Its not that bad, and you will definantly get better. I have faith in you ability :)

Por Beastmaster7700
 

I really am sorry if the review I gave you seemed harsh, but its for constructive purposes. Honestly, I was pretty bad at making a good adventure, and it takes time practice, and critism to get it right.

Por Beastmaster7700
 

Not bad, the characters used like the devil and underlings were great, but the visible teleporters, and half-decent scenery put it off. Also, be sure to use correct spelling, and never use emoticons, It makes what could be a tense moment silly