Sporistics
A Mans Fears and Dreams
Very good!
By addictt
01/27/2009 - 05:33:57
Type: House building
Rating: 18.75 (Very good!)
Description
Darkness surrounds this room that I live.
Shadows cast figures, that blackness will give.
Transforming a room of unknown sight.
To bring onto me, my "fears of night".
Unrealistic thoughts of open gates.
A wall of vision, my mind creates.
Through my eyes, these things are real.
My "fears of night", that I still feel.
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By Flying Penguin
great scence! well done
By johasbun
wow!!! very good creation!! and the description is awesome!!!
By joanmiro
terrific scene R[s]
By BellaBlim
wow this looks really great and I love the story!
By Need2Win
Excellent, very cool Poem and creation, two for one! R+
By NazDude
Love the poem and the building itself!
By wiiformii
THE poem IS AWSOME!!!!!!!!
By XOTLY
Very poetic and nice design - love how you did the boy's arms - his expression matches so well with your poem - excellent job
By Fenrir3
Really nice building and description! R+ to green =)
By dragonwolf97
LOVE THE POEM.
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