By Al_B_Bach
01/09/2009 - 20:17:36
Type: Creature
Rating: 1.46 (Not rated)
Tags: al_b_bach, fantasy, herbivore, water
Description
The last of the Sea-na-corns,a true waste that you'll see,a tragedy in the deep blue sea,soon you'll know why she's forlorn,just give me some time and listen to me.Once plentiful and bounding,swimming-darting and at play,just having a good time-that is to say,with the rolling surf a pounding,to youth another fun filled day.Times grow old as generations past,the elders pass their wisdom down,though youth it seems just wants to clown,thinking surly 'these old ones won't last',they kept ignoring the heeds and the elders frowns.So frollick they must-dart in open sea,for this the young they all did go,forgetting words that they should know,the beasts out there eat you and me,beware-watch where you do go.Now youth with numbers oh so few,snuck off to frolick and then to kiss,that was the mind of this gentle miss,adorned she was-like morning dew,off to have some good time bliss.Tag is the favorite game,avoid each other this group did play,out to have fun on this wonderful day,but this day you see was not the same,for silence it was a coming this way.From out of the deep,with big shiny teeth,it swam right up on the reef,no one noticed-nor gave a peep,for all but one went behind shiny teeth.Poor lassies Bessie and Nessie, the lads Ned, Ted and even young Red,gone forever-cause their all dead,oh poor little Essie,she just hangs her head.The elders all weep,youth is something to save,why didn't they just behave,for now in this deep,is a watery grave.Now she swims all alone,lost friends and beau-its so sad,it makes her feel so really bad,now all she does is sigh and moan,for now it seems there's not to be had, within this sea another lad.*Inspired by Aaarrrggg's Senysha* [Creature design by Al B. Bach]
DNA points
71 Bones | 0 Feet | 0 Hands |
Health: +4
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Sociability 8 / 20 | Aggressiveness 6 / 20 | Abilities 3 / 15 |
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By lumpyice
She is beautiful i love the the spiky things on this and the blue and gold you used on her is awesome!!! great job sincerely lumpyice :):):)
By Sol_ember
Great creature! I really like the coloring. I haven't seen many seahorse creatures.
By Tsulea2k
This looks pretty and delicate, well done!
By M1K3_MAN
Very nice I love the Colour sceme, description and the details, i Just dont like the back, To many seemily (probably not) random racing Whatd'ya-ma-call-its on its back.
By AZ2612
hey Al_B_Bach, long time no see :) Anyway, I wanted to check up on you and I found this little beauty. This is amazing and I hope to see more of your fantastic work!
By friedaS
Very nice creature, love the details on the back and the horns, R+
By Deztiny
Read the entire description! You should be a poet!!!
By Purple_flame
Absolutely beautiful. The colors and details are stunning, and I love the poetic description. Oh btw thanx for adding my template ^^
By Morartu
Cool!
By BellaBlim
Very beautiful! Love the blue
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