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Stripes's StoryPart1 (Improved)
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Por MegaSnowPea
28/01/2020 - 18:16:35
Tipo: Aventura sin género
Puntuación: 0 (No puntuado)
Tags: school
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This story is about an alien creature called Stripes, no one knows what type of creature he is but he is really timid and shy and he is in for an adventure but first... school time :) I fixed one error in this adventure
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Por amarae1369
mik moore (make more)
Por BENJIBENJI
I just played your adventure and I find it really cool ! If you still plan to continue this story, I'll be pleased to play it ! And don't worry if there are some mistakes in spelling, I think that you're good at writing !
Por Paxnfacto
you are doing good at both writing and adventure layout -some typos in the text - but I look forward to the next chapter
Por Paxnfacto
This actually is a very charming and fun story so far. and deep! how old are you? I am impressed by your story telling skills and scene layout. I don't have Creepy and cute so I can't rate it but a thumbs up from me!